Plagiarized

Plagiarized

A Poem by KeelyJane

Scribbles and chicken scratches

Lead pencils and ink

Paper lined with torment

The overflowing of what I think

Epiphanies and wonder

Circular nonsense

Straight Forward and subtle

Past and present tense

Words written from the chambers

My feel box filled with sin

With the font of my emotion

I plagiarize my within

© 2020 KeelyJane


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My mind see's someone in front of a type writer, wanting to throw it, break it, smash it, take the hammer to the keys that won't work. Than after much sweat, grunting and swearing, knowing we are the masters (or Mistresses) of our own universe when it meets paper.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I love the perfectly understandable nonsensical and whimsical nature of this nexus of inner words! A beautiful flow of woven emotion mixed with a tango and perhaps a nice bottle of red wine on a dreamdesk filled with ink!

You don't get much better than this muse, tis what I think.

Awesome Ink!
Aaron - Wolfwind


Posted 10 Years Ago


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All those emotions that pour onto paper, the hurts, the regrets, the grief and all .. and there they are, stretched before the near perpetrator of thoughts undivine.. and yes.. you plaiagrize your within .. you take what you feel as if your right and broadcast it . Those three last lines are brilliant.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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With the font of my emotion
I plagiarize my within
wow that is pretty deep writing. Love those last two lines especially.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow to the piece...

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Wow interesting twist. Your work always delights me, you mistress of the pen. Interesting question...do we as writers plagiarize our souls?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"feel box filled with sin"...
Now THAT is going to take me a while to recover from..a very original line. Actually they all leave me with that "haven't slept or cared in days" feeling. You've spilled dualities from their peak! Nice~

Posted 10 Years Ago


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"With the font of my emotion
I plagiarized my within"

...stunning way to end a poem. true, what we write is sometimes a reflection of our thoughts and emotions.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We all plagarize our emotions. Nice one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice flow to the piece...

Posted 10 Years Ago


I plagiarize my within...

This is a clever concept. When we write, we take from our own soul, sometimes surprised by what we find... Great write.

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KeelyJane
KeelyJane

Albuquerque, NM



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I'm just a girl with a lifetime of experiences. I've taken from those experiences what can be put into words and poetically put them together to share with all of you. These are my contributions. .. more..

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