We Wisdom

There is something to be said about collaboration, the union of talent. Different ingredients making art from scratch. I'll begin with an opening stanza. Please let your comment be your addition...

Slip into my mind sometime
 try it on for size
Albeit too big or too small
once worn you're twice wise

Author's Note

There is something to be said about collaboration, the union of talent.
Different ingredients making art from scratch.
I'll begin with an opening stanza. Please let your comment be your addition to this pie

Reviews

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Here you will find a symbolic union,
where art imitates life, and life is confusion.
Understand the differences, relish the unique--
sit down on these rocks and sip from this creek,
where knowledge is power, weilded with a pen
and no one by you and me knows where this will end...

[TL Boehm]

It fits like a worn pair of jeans
Or maybe a strappy dress
Perhaps some studded stilettos
This mental trapping will impress

[kublakhan27]

I'd have to think about a potential extension, but it looks like you've already received some great responses and I'm not sure I can top them...there is indeed something to be said for collaboration, and I thank you for opening up in this way :)

[Pete Langley]

The great and good
have no place leaving us behind
when our thoughts would
make theirs the loving kind.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Even brick houses have windows and doors
I leave mine closed but unlocked
so my dreams don't get a musty smell
and my thoughts are free to wonder.

[Sheila Kline]

When you are feeling alone
know that others care
Accept the love they have for you
End then your despair!

[Baby Ricochet]

Watch for crooked sentries
Paid off with cheap bribes
Tricksters riding neurons
one word to the wise

[Baby Ricochet]

This stanza's about my mind. I don't want ya'll to get all confused now

[gombeggar]

I am intrigued...would be interested in collaborating

[gombeggar]

oh u expect a writ up right away?
naughty girl
same as always

[trainwreck]

Beginning the cycle around,
eyes on the ground
I'll only take my coat
and my chances out of town.

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Walking barefoot and naked
Through the sands of time
Where all life is sacred
And earth is divine

[Perkele.7885]

Here, in this provacitive un-confining space
there is ample space to grow
Filled with pockets full of inner peace
and ideas sprouting, row on row!