Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Fast Forwarding

Fast Forwarding

A Poem by Victoria Nakis

I can see where this is going

Darling, I’ve seen this coming;

The impasse that’s been approaching all along,

Well it’s finally here; now make your move.

 

This could end up as being nothing,

Or you could turn it into everything.

Sweetie, let’s chose the first one,

Because all I’m saying is I want you to stay.

 

I want to take the path less traveled,

Where there’s no need to see things unraveled.

Just hold my hand love, and never let go;

Let’s skip the conflict and fast forward to the happy ending.

© 2011 Victoria Nakis


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Victoria Nakis
Oh the wonders of writing.

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I want to take the path less traveled,
Where there’s no need to see things unraveled.
Just hold my hand love, and never let go;
Let’s skip the conflict and fast forward to the happy ending.

This stanza's nice, deep and powerful. I can see the views of this write. Great write... totally came from your heart and converted into your own words.
keep writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 20, 2011
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Victoria Nakis
Victoria Nakis

Rochester, NH



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My name is Victoria. I've lost touch with writing lately, but it's always been a passion. It's my favorite outlet when the feelings I have can't be contained. I'm not particularly good at poetry.. more..

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