Love notes to John 1

I let my mind go and type these messages to John. He calls them poems. Its just how my mind organizes my thoughts though.

If I could be where i dreamed to be at this moment in time 

then I'd be at peace in a plain white sun dress on a warm spring day 

standing in a vibrate green meadow nothing around for miles 

laying in the grass the sun warming my skin 

as a cool spring rain kept me cool causing my dress to cling to my skin. 

And you would be there with me. 

Your fingers interlaced with mine. 

No words spoken.

 No movement needed. 

Just at peace. 

Breathing in the air as we escape for just a moment inside my mind. 

Because believe it or not there is such a peace inside me 

that if i could only clear out thoughts of things out of my control 

and relinquish my fear and my past 

it would be a beautiful place to visit 

if you would allow me to take you there. 

Show you my beauty within. 

Show you the peace I have. 

A place no one has been, 

If you would let me.

Author's Note

This is one of the things I write with out thinking. Please tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Gee]

That's beautiful,sad.Sad because it is such a simple thing to wish for yet it seems out of your reach.And then I read your "About".If there is a God may he bless you over and over.Take care