Here with me

Here with me

A Poem by grace
"

forget about everything for one moment

"
when you're too alone and its been a rainy day
when u cant sense enough if some light is coming your way 
the table of luck is sinking down 
all your sweet smiles slowly turn to frowns 

know that this night would never stay the same 
there's too much weight on your shoulders, so pull it off a little day by day 
find your own muse to dance around 
cz you're too young to give up your crown

when your eyes are soft and a tear falls from your cheek 
u know you'll recall this day when you'll outgrow your weak 
ain't there too much to think about?
so forget about it all and just be here with me now. 

© 2022 grace


Author's Note

grace
its a small note. everyone of us needs assurance, a hand, thats it.

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Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

Posted 5 Months Ago


grace

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading it! I am glad you liked it.
"Hey, ain't it good to know you got a friend cause people can be so cold, they'll hurt you and desert you. They'll take your soul if you let them but don't you let them." James Taylor

You are so right. Everybody needs a hand or a hug or a smile sometime. I so enjoyed the read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


grace

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading it!
I appreciate you for taking the time to read my work :)
Everyone needs someone to pick them up sometimes.
Amazing poem. Greatly moving

Posted 6 Months Ago


grace

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading it :)
BEST

5 Months Ago

you are welcome
We all have sad days when it's dreary outside and we're alone, everyone needs a pick me up from a friend whether it's a phone call, a text or a visit... it really helps...assurance is a good word...nice write
Warmly, B

Posted 10 Months Ago


grace

5 Months Ago

Very true dear Betty! Thank you for your kind words and your gentle review. It means a lot to me.
Betty Hermelee

5 Months Ago

You’re very welcome Grace
Happy New Year!
Warmly
B.
Thank you.

That is a very hopeful and inspirable poem.

Awesome poetry. Keep it up!

Blessed be!

Posted 10 Months Ago


grace

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much 💓!! i'm glad you liked it!!
The_Ancient_Rock

10 Months Ago

You are most welcome.

Be well!

💖👍
Hi Grace, your poem offers hope, when hope may be fading. The sweetness of the final two lines, nicely encapsulates this.

Posted 11 Months Ago


grace

11 Months Ago

That's wonderful to hear! It's always my goal to uplift and inspire others through my writing, and I.. read more
All things pass and those sad moments will dissipate like mist in the sun on a beautiful morning.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


grace

1 Year Ago

This is so sweet Chris. Thanks.
beautiful.. thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


grace

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading

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