Over

sigh

time doesn't heal wounds

youre brain forgets they're there

until you are reminded

of how much you still care

 

I thought

but I'm not

over you

It's sad but true

 

tried to find someone new

and forget about you

but I love you girl

you're my world

 

you're me sweetie

my cherry pie

I was youre savior

I was youre guy

 

story I heard till the day I met you

story I'll hear till the day I die

try to move on but I can not forget you

you said you loved me but that was a lie

 

you said it's ok

that you forgave me

but we can't be

you and I

oh how I wish you were still mine

 

I still ask myself why

why am I lonely

why do I cry

you were the only

I was the guy

 

if you could just see

what happened to me

you didn't see the tear I cried

you said you wouldn't hurt me

but you lied

 

it wasn't me

who hurt you

I have the effort

to show you it's true

 

you don't talk to me

what can I do

I should've known better

to give myself over to you

 

I'm regreting

ever letting

you slip out of my life

I was thinking of you for my wife

 

if you would let me

say I'm sorry

and truly give me

one last shot

 

I swear I'll do better

and I don't lie

can't you see

how hard I fight

 

living without you isn't a life

and that's why I try

thats why I cry

I want to have you

but you want me to die

 

S

 

Author's Note

I wrote this a while ago

Reviews

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

Woah i have read other poems about break ups but none of them have ever hit me this hard this reminds me about about a long talk i had with a guy and this is very strongly written and this girl who ever you wrote about well she is very lucky to have you care so much about her and i am sorry that she blames you because that is not right but this was amazingly portrayed and understood very strongly and remember there are always people who care and i understand when you are talking about you regretting losing her because i know i have a huge regret of losing somebody but anyways this was amazing! Great write! and remember i am always here for you to talk to!!!
~Skylar Bay your friend ♥

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks sky

[♥ Lexii Boo ♥]

anytime :)

[deepblue04]

awwh!! I sympathize! Good job!

[Satire69]

it's always hard when it's over

[CHRIS ANDES]

the third stanza "I was youre savior,I was youre guy" can be written as "i was your savior/your guy..."
right?
this was like the song sad but true by metallica
..great poem harley
=]

[Harley (arbiter)]

I like Metallica and will check it out Thanks

[CHRIS ANDES]

really?.. it's the hardest metal band I know
=]
they're really cool!

[Pax]

sad and very emotional. good write.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow! This is a amazing-awesome-sad-emotional-outstanding-greatly written poem
I loved and enjoyed it :)
Rating 100/100

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[Melody]

This is very sad...and emotional. It's like I can actually feel the pain pouring off of it. Very nicely written. In a sad way it's quite beautiful. I hope everything gets better...or better than it can be when you're that sad. :/

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thanks. Again this was a Tad ago

[Melody]

You're welcome.

[Mariah Corey]

this poem is allows the reader to feel the love that you share and the words sound very well put like two puzzle peices put together. :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

Thank you

[Mariah Corey]

no prob

[Aurora .I.]

Wonderful poem honey! It's truly beautiful, truthful and filled with emotion. Especially the first few lines. Time doesn't heal wounds but it aids you in trying to make it better with yourself. It helps the amount you care fade, though you always do a little bit. However unfortunate it may be that she thinks all these negative things about you and that she won't give you a second chance, in the end that just shows true colors. In relationships you have things thrown at you, if you can't overcome them together then it just wasn't meant to work. Besides that- This was a wonderful piece love- Thank you for sharing your art with the world.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I wrote this a while ago I'm over her now the reason I didn't post it was because I didn't want to make anyone mad. Course it still did.

[Aurora .I.]

Well who cares if you make them mad? It's your art, you have every right to show it if you want to!

[Harley (arbiter)]

That's what I tried to say but (no offense) can't win an argument with a mad woman. :/

[Aurora .I.]

:/ No offense taken- It's the truth! XD

[nigrum homonculus]

the emotion and rhyme work so well together. i completely absorbed the feelings in this piece. but my bro, don't wear your heart on your sleeve. its only more vulnerable to a wayward arrow from cupid. keep it locked away in your chest and the right person will give you the patience you deserve. keep up the good work and stay strong!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Yeah I know I've been told that by other friends Thanks man