Me

back to the old mobile browser :/ this was written in anger. like a thoughtfull vent.

Author's Note

I am just a tool
A weak fool

Used
Abused
Bruised

All my life
Fought through strife

Just to be used some more
Like some pimps whore

And I've tried to stay nice
But my soul turned to ice

Used so much; now broke
I rise up with no hope

And snap

Something inside of me
Angry

Fed up from this shit
I want to leave this pit

Fuck you
You don't care, I'm through

I try and try
I should just DIE
Instead of cry

You wouldn't care
All those times I was there

For you

My mistake
I make

Now your gone
And I shall soon move on

For I no longer feel
My Numbness is real

No-one gives a shit
I've had it

Leave me be
So I can die peacefully
You'll see
The end will set me free

Goodbye
Don't cry

They're fake tears
Losing me is not one of your fears

Go on; you won't be sad
I know for a fact you'll be glad

You live without me now
You already know how

So I go
To where; no-one will know
Filled with sorrow

Anger, misery, pain
No longer sane

A lone man
I know I can

Heart of death and black
My former self will never be back

I no longer care
Already out of your hair
I prepare

To leave regretfully
Unforgiven here; me

Reviews

[devon]

This was really intense and raw, and I like that about it. Instead of using metaphors and similes and such to kind of let other interpret how you feel, you just came out and said it.

I think it's great that you can vent through your writing, dear. :)

[Melody]

I agree...I hope this is just a poem not a letter...Don't go off the deep end.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I know how you feel, mate, but fighting in spite of all those who want to bring you down is what I do. Because most of the people try to bury you because they know you're a good person; better than them.
As for the poem, it's good. I like the rhythm those short lines create; it's kinda intense.
Stay strong!

[Harley (arbiter)]

Seems you and me think the same :D thanks for the review

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Great minds think alike, haha.
You're welcome!

[Jocelin]

I agree with emoeyore...

[Soul Fire]

Wow .....very powerful filled with raw emotions.

[SmileBig :)]

:( I wish you didn't feel so bad...death isn't the answer though. Anything I can do?

[Harley (arbiter)]

I know its not. This is just a vent. :) thanks though

[SmileBig :)]

Oh ok good :) and np

[That_Girl]

I'm seriously hoping this is just a poem... and not a letter....

[A. V. Madison]

Me too. Harley is my best friend and I don't know what I would do without him.

[That_Girl]

He better get his a*s on this piece and let us know he's okay.... :/

[Harley (arbiter)]

its just a vent. I'm handiling it. Metallica is helping lol

[That_Girl]

Alright love. :) I'm glad. I hope things start to look up for you. Metallica always helps! ;)

[A. V. Madison]

Wow... I don't know what to think... You're talking about suicide in this... and.... if you were to kill yourself I don't know what I would do... please don't... :.(

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its just a controlled vent