Grim reaper's feelings

Grim reaper's feelings

A Poem by Harley (arbiter)
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Because we all have feelings right?

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Why do people fear me?  

  For it is not I who brings the end of lives. 

 I am only a messenger and the only messenger I am.  

 A taxi to the other sides.

  I did not ask for this job.  

 People say I did but those are lies.

  But I have accepted that I am the one there

  When someone dies.

© 2012 Harley (arbiter)


Author's Note

Harley (arbiter)
I just thought.... What would it be like to be death. People come on. I want to know what you thought about it. At least say something

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This is a brilliant poem, and it brings up a really good point. A whole nother side to something that we have thought of as bad or evil for our entire lives. This flow worked really well, and I really like how straight-to-the-point it was. The meaning was clear, and you got it across in very few words. Good for you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Why thank you. I'm honored for the review. *Jedi bow*



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A very good write my friend......Whisk

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thank you it's an honor
This is a brilliant poem, and it brings up a really good point. A whole nother side to something that we have thought of as bad or evil for our entire lives. This flow worked really well, and I really like how straight-to-the-point it was. The meaning was clear, and you got it across in very few words. Good for you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Why thank you. I'm honored for the review. *Jedi bow*
I love the darkness in it. Rarely do you come across a piece of writing like this.
I'm a devoted fan of yours, yes, but I'd like to see you do better. Push your limits, Harley.

What can you do that you're not showing, hmm?


M

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Challenge accepted! When I defeat writers block. >:(
A. V. Madison

11 Years Ago

Hahaha alrighty
I do not fear, you, I even feel you...
Nice poem. Frequences need to be shared.

E.L.

Posted 11 Years Ago


11 Years Ago

You're not alone, in this... :)
Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Yay! It's never good to alone. : )

11 Years Ago

Watch the movie: " The perfect Host" did you saw it already? you shall adore it. Nothing is what it .. read more
Nice poem I like the ominus feeling of it, but at the same time you kinda have to feel bad for the guy. I mean imagine if your job was to collect souls

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Exactly! Most people think he's evil and etc. That's what I'm trying to say in this though. He's not.. read more
Nice poem,,,
I think you should change the title to "GRIM REAPER'S FEELINGS".
You forgot to put an apostrophe.
Anyway, the message of the poem is very clear. (=

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thanks for pointing that out. And Thanks for the review!
Wow. I find it very interesting you wrote from his perspective but I love the spin you took on it. And in reality, it's probably quite true. Death just comes at the end. He doesn't get you there. - A taxi to the other sides.
I wasn't sure what you meant by that sentence though. Most people say, "I'll meet you on the other side." So when you say, 'sides,' do you just mean that there are many for different people? I mean, it's a poem so it could be cryptic and what not but I think it might be better to read if you wrote sides.
Anyway, I'm just being nit picky, thanks for a great poem. I loved the last bit: I have have accepted that I am the one there when someone dies.
It's very cool to think of that because you have death by your side, when no-one else is. Thanks for a great poem again, keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harley (arbiter)

11 Years Ago

Thanks. And about "the other sides" welp I put that there meaning heaven and hell. Others have actua.. read more
Tamelia Jade

11 Years Ago

Ah. Yeah, I was like, he probably actually means that. Well, it was great anyway :)
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love this a lot!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lovely to meet a budding young creative such as thee. Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh, so neat! I've never thought about writing anything from the reaper's perspective. I really like what you did here. I especially liked the line about being a taxi to the other sides. The last two lines are gripping and definitely fitting. Very well done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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I am different. I am the unforgiven. I was born october 1997. I just write because I want to express my feelings in more ways than music and art. I'm just a guy trying to get out of the rain and sur.. more..

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