Crash crash burn...

Crash crash burn

I can't remember

what love feel's like

I am too scared

to even try

Crash crash burn

An empty feeling

follows

you may not understand me

the heart will still yearn

but if my soul dies 

within your arms

Don't let your heart crash

Don't let your soul burn..

Author's Note

Err... yeah... I think I might need a day rehab...

Reviews

[Robert Haigh]

I think many people have felt like that at some time in their life, and they will readily identify with this poem. A well-penned piece, with an edgy feel to it.

[EMF]

Nah. You don't need rehab. Your good as you are. And this poem is terific. Small typo in first stanza (scared) I think. Brilliant job though, with great momentum and terrifying content. Poems like this show, just how damn good you are