Good to Bad

[A high school write]

A heart once so giving became a stone that takes. Eyes that once showed love became soulless holes that hate. A mouth that once spoke truth is now a fool that lies A pair of hands that used to heal is now a set of tools that destroy A body that I once loved, has became every mans toy. All it takes is one bad person, to create another. All it takes is one mistake, to make your life go down under. if your reading this. whatever you do, please don't corrupt someone. 

You may create a monster.

Reviews

[AliciaB]

This is really intense. The line "All it takes is one bad person, to create another" is, quite frankly, terrifying in its truthfulness. We don't always consider the effects that our actions can have on other people, but they can definitely change someone's life, and sometimes in horrible ways. The final two lines are shocking and painful to read. I get the feeling, based on another of your works I have read, that this sort of thing happened to you, or to someone close to you. If I am wrong, I am deeply sorry, but if not, I will say again that I am praying for you. I'm not sure how much significance this will hold, but please remember that you do not have to be a monster. You are not defined by the pain that one person caused you. You are beautiful, even if you are broken. We all are. You are totally unique in your perspectives, ideas, and talents, and you are an unrepeatable gift to the world.

[unspokenpain]

this was something I wrote in highschool lol

[CrumbsInMyBed]

I love this. It's so true. All it takes it one person, one bad decision to send life into a spiral.

[unspokenpain]

I'm glad you enjoyed this. ^.^

[mou]

It is beautiful!
I like the poem which follow a pattern and have a depth of thought.
I like it and thanks for sharing

[unspokenpain]

yourwelcome