Bondage

Poetry speaks

Let me tie you up with words,
words that bind you with lust.
Like ropes tied too tight,
feel the pain hit with every line,
feel the burn that feels just right.

Let me muffle you with my voice,
that voice that you've never heard,
yet know so well.
Like a gag that makes words hide,
feel the drool pour with every rhyme,
feel the saliva that makes you mine.

Will you crawl to me,
and ask for this to stop?
Are my words no longer thrilling,
or are you afraid of what you became?
But don't you worry reader,
you don't have to pretend you're not,
pretend were not the same.

I will continue to hit you with my words,
words that sting and hurt.
Still you will return,
still you will beg,
beg that I whip you with another verse.

I see it in you,
that face that turns red with joy,
red with lust.
I will grab that rope,
write another line,
and wait til you say it's too much.

With every passing day,
with every word I write,
this love will grow.
You will ask for more and more,
til I make you mine,

til I make you know.

That this is who you are.
That this is what bondage means.
That you can't live without this.
Welcome home....

My masochist.

Reviews

[AliciaB]

Yikes. Freaky. The language throughout this poem is highly effective in creating a tone of domination and disgust that accurately reflects the message. The direct addresses to the reader are particularly powerful, and, I have to admit, a little gut-wrenching. This poem quite frankly freaked me out a little bit. You exhibit an excellent command of language and tone, making the entire piece gripping. Great work!

[unspokenpain]

This was a fun poem to work on and I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^.^

[Ana Papaya]

Good poem .

[unspokenpain]

im happy you enjoyed it ^.^

[Nia Lisa]

This poem was sexy,''or are you afraid of what you have become'' would sound more proper, well done! :)

[unspokenpain]

thank you for the feedback!

[CrumbsInMyBed]

I absolutely LOVE this! Amazing job!

[unspokenpain]

i'm happy you liked this ^.^