One sided

poetry speaks

Hello met goodbye.

A greeting with no meaning

and feelings loving nothing.

Such is this story.

I wont go from the beginning,

as that's the ending.

Love is the premise,

but hate is the writer.

Life in each sentence

and death is its pen.

So we begin were it starts,

begin at its end.

Terrifying.

That was life for him.

Love exchanged for hate,

lost to other men.

Her.

That was death for him.

They met, they left.

One loved, one lived.

Lost to other men.

Such a short story,

when Hello met Goodbye.

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Well that is dark and deep. Some grammar issues are there. In the second stanza it must be "and death is its pen" and "begin at its end" instead of "and death is it's pen" and "begin at it's end".
"It's" is short for "It is" when you talk of the possessive form of it, then the correct words is "its" and not "it's".
Anyway, speaking of your poem, it is extremely well-written. The emotion that lies in your words, the feeling expressed by your lines, they're just commendable- they capture the mind. Keep writing.

[unspokenpain]

thank you. I can't believe I made those mistakes lol

[Brittanie Bardwell]

Very well written and deep as it lingers to many emotions I think many people experience. Great work!

[unspokenpain]

im happy you enjoyed it ^.^