Watch Me

Watch me

Watch me live in morbidity

Watch me fall,crash and burn

on my knees

 

 

Yes, I have had better days

And I will

But for now,

Watch me live in morbidity

For now,

Watch me speak about my sunshine that will come one day

But for now let me live in morbidity

Let me one day say that you will come and set me free

But for now

Watch me live in morbidity

And when that day comes,

It will not be you ,sadly

So,for now,just watch me

Live in morbidity,

For now,

Just for now.

Death has no friend.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

That was so nice ,so lovely ,just the thought of it...
Watch me now,watch me live my sickness
Watch me fall,watch me crash and burn..on my knees
I did have better days,and I know I will,but for now,want to hide from my life
Watch me tell on my sunshine that will come one day..but now let me hide
Let me one day hope that I will ever be free..but for now just want to hide ..
this talks a lot about life ,its ups and downs..
that was so nice..those words almost talked..
lovely write..

[Ashley long]

Liked it ! very good job!

[Kimberly Smith]

I like this poem alot..its really good

[Liz Alexander]

The poem speaks volumes.

[Kelley]

Death has no friends..... I love that line.
Very sad write but a good write.
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[John Stussy]

This was a powerfully written poem, many writers know the feeling of writing dark. Some embrace it, others lament it, but nearly every one writes it, for it is our duty as writers to document such times, good and bad. Well done, keep it up.

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

"Watch me

Watch me live in morbidity

Watch me fall,crash and burn

on my knees"

Wonderfully frank and cold opening. I loved it. Reminiscent of my own feelings on Those Grey Days. Really well expressed!