Golden Memories

I miss my school days very hardly....

Memories of school are like life's
preserved pearls,
Those memories always in my mind
whirls.
Around that merry go round i used to
play,
And in art room we enjoyed those
crayons, paint , and clay.
Those toys, flicks, and handpower fight,
in all we beleived we are at might.
we changed our classes just for our
friends,
And that was among the schools very
old trends.
Those days we enjoyed everywhere,
with our hearts and minds deprived of
any fear.
A teacher who made us to sit on the
floor,
Because in exams she expected very big
score.
And also a teacher who helped me in my
studies,
with whom i forgot all stress all worries.
He helped, cared and encouraged me,
and said, you work hard, rest i will see!
Those bunking of classes for the
pleasure time,
With which we got addicted like the
addictness of the wine.
My school days really i missed a lot,
Because that was the life without a
blot!

Reviews

[The dark story]

i totally agree with this poem...i love my school life a lot...and even the time we spend weith our teachers they are not less than our friends...i sorely liked this poem from the bottom of my heart..serioulsy..it's too nice and sweet...i have just got ourt from my 10th standard but i will serioulsy miss my high school teachers..they are so coooollllllll and nice..thanks alot for this lovely written poem...and yeah before i forget...i liked it's rhyming ..it's impeccable!!1

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write . Thank you for sharing the memories of your school ...:)

[uzair zahid]

Thank you...

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Junert]

You had a great time at school for you to miss it. I miss some friends at time, but not school. A well written poem.

[khalid]

it is really nice when we remember old memories specially those related to the school and friends we miss. very nicely penned..
thank you for such a nice poem..

[uzair zahid]

thanx a lott!!

[WingsToFly]

Very true! Beautifully written with nice flow. :-)

[uzair zahid]

thank u!

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A nice poem.
In the end we're left with nothing but memories.
Good write!

[uzair zahid]

exactly....you have not felt how a person feels after leaving school! But u will realize it one day... Anywayz ....Thank you!!

[KurKota]

Nicely done, a very nice time in our lifes. Some memories very pleasant, others not so much. Just a small techincal thing.....the line "Around that marry go round I used to play.....it should be the spelling of "merry"...as in happy, not the one you used which is the married application....understandable error. But good efffort.

[uzair zahid]

thanks a lott!!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

It's a really nice poem, nicely written. You'll get better with time.

[uzair zahid]

thank you.. I hope so!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

School days!
I miss em for sure....
At the end of the day, it's just memories that are left and nothing!
Nice poem; you will get better!

[uzair zahid]

thank you...

[zainul]

Nice work.
Enjoyed reading.
I feel the same like you.
Please check this line to see which words have been omitted,"a also a teacher who helped me in my studies,"
Besides,you may also rethink of this sentence,"With which we got addicted like the
effects of the wine."

[uzair zahid]

Thank you very much..