i was right..!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i tried to be happy in the days of tide

I tried to smile in the times of crying

I tried to not care for those who lied

I tried to cheer up for those who cared

I tried to ignore those who don’t wanna talk

I tried to be quiet when no one was interested

I tried to forget all through my writings

I tried so hard but I was unsuccessful

I tried so much but my desires left unfulfilled

I tried so hard to meet success one day

I tried and I tried and I tried and I’m glad that I glide

I tried because of the fake crowed in my life

I tried because someone really matters in my life

I tried for being what I am and I’m me today

I was trying for success and I was right

I tried to bring myself back and I did because my trials were right….

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Laura Ex]

i like the way this poem makes me think of going from doubt to reassurance. trying because it's right.

[Walkingblind]

You were right!!! We all have to atleast try, if we dont we have no say so
over anything. No one is going to try and take on our live and change it for
the better we have to press on through trails and do things ourselves
with the grace of God....very nice!!!

[sue]

You have a great understanding of the truth for one so young. Wonderful poem.

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

A good one...!
And its gud that u tried......:)

[Alice Oiseau]

Good poem. We try and try and eventually we get it right. Thank God for that.
Keep up the writing.
Cheers.

[poetic soul]

keep up the spirit gal....its needed to keep you going on in life...!! :)

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[red_saphyre]

This poem made me want to cry, in a good way. I love that you never gave up. It is really inspiring to read your poem

[Pratibha]

you are a winner Vaishali already because you have never stopped trying and THAT is important...rest all is so fake and superficial....

[17thWhitePrince]

very nice :)
you always kept trying
and never gave up :)

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is just perfect!
Loved the ending lines the most-
"I tried to bring myself back and I did because my trials were right�." - so very well penned!
very raw and powerful piece :)