SiLeNt TeAr

 

 

 

 

Days passed by and my tear became so rare

But no one knows every night I still cry a silent tear

Inside my heart flows a ocean of emotions of my unfulfilled dreams

I live in the world of my loneliness...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is the one very close to my heart...!
as no one forgets there pain they only get used to it...!this is something related to that...!

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

everyone pass through these moments..
but i want to ask what is it you want to be fulfilled..every body has dreams
i have always known that running after life,so we will get out of her all we wish for
its a rat race,it does not deserve the trouble ,i have dreams too ,but i dont follow them
yes i dream but i live my life,if they come true so be it ,if not its just you are not that lucky
thats how life works,thats how i always knew her to be..
i will never shed a tear for unfulfilled dreams for i think my dreams are fulfilled
once i have them in my mind.......
lovely write..

[Nish Nish the Fish]

This was extremely heartfelt and beautiful to the core!
I invite you to read my poem "Darling Don't Be Sad" in hopes that you gain hope and that you aren't trapped in this distress for too long!

[Slender Smile/Husna Tay..]

Thats so sad...:(
I know how it feels......
I spent d nights crying too....
But what brings the pain will bring alonng with it lesson to be remembered in life.
Don't dwell on the past, go into ur future with your head held high.
But if u are late, then ur present is forever lost.

[LlamaLord]

Very very very meaningful. Interesting piece :)

[LonelySoul]

this work of yours,moves me in such a way as to respond to your writing in kind...as a poet would.
First,let me say...Nice work on your poem. d:?)

The Silent Tear that trickles down my cheek,
tracing lines of my saddened lips and dripping off my chin,
falling into the emptieness of my lonely soul,
as the echos of the tear drop on the floor,
remind me of the scattered pieces of my own broken heart...
Michael "LonelySoul"

[Winter McPherson]

Very concise and heartfelt.....a small poem with lots of emotion and meaning.

[Alice Oiseau]

"Inside my heart flows an ocean of emotions"
That hits close to home. Though for me, very few have a window to view the ocean.

Good poem.
Cheers.

[~angelalala~]

very haunting, dark, & very sad. & how i can relate. "Inside my heart flows a ocean of emotions of my unfulfilled dreams I live in the world of my loneliness..." i love these lines. deep inside, it seems each one of us is all alone. loneliness may always remain, but sadness comes & sadness goes. a deep, dark, haunting piece. i loved it.

[Kelley]

Very sad and nobody knows.


the heart always tends to know the mind.
great write vaishali parnami!
Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Awake.&.Unafraid]

You write right from your heart, and there's a lot to be said for that. You speak with a very honest emotion. Beautiful writing and beautiful artwork to go with it as well :) Short and sweet!

[17thWhitePrince]

WoW ... !!!