SiLeNt TeAr

 

 

 

 

Days passed by and my tear became so rare

But no one knows every night I still cry a silent tear

Inside my heart flows a ocean of emotions of my unfulfilled dreams

I live in the world of my loneliness...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is the one very close to my heart...!
as no one forgets there pain they only get used to it...!this is something related to that...!

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

everyone pass through these moments..
but i want to ask what is it you want to be fulfilled..every body has dreams
i have always known that running after life,so we will get out of her all we wish for
its a rat race,it does not deserve the trouble ,i have dreams too ,but i dont follow them
yes i dream but i live my life,if they come true so be it ,if not its just you are not that lucky
thats how life works,thats how i always knew her to be..
i will never shed a tear for unfulfilled dreams for i think my dreams are fulfilled
once i have them in my mind.......
lovely write..

[Pratibha]

I would say one thing Vaishali....crying is healing...it heals from inside and then things get clearer...and we can appreciate the results better and can take better decisions

[Anita B Jacques]

So sad and honest, I understand the feeling and the pain, at times I feel invisible in a very busy world and not part of it. You are sharing your beautiful writing with us, we realize, we are not so alone after all, Jesus
Is by your side, always. God bless you

[poetic soul]

it is very heart wrenching....moving....a very obvious phase given a very nice form in words....the picture added to the effect! nicely done...and about pain and loneliness, well dear, all i can say it, its all in the mind!!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Big ol' Kahuna]

I think a lot of people can relate to this poem in life. I believe each person who is lonely or down needs to find some sort of light to get them through, whether that is spiritual, or a hobby like writing for instance, or even the simplist of things; for me that is the thought that no matter how bad things get, they always get better. You never know what life will throw your way next, but the bad times make the good ones feel that much better.
Good job V. Keep on writing!

[Just Plain Me]

This is a incredible piece of writing...i love how anyone and everyone can relate to it, no matter who they are or what their life is like.

[Linda Stinson]

Yea, though I walk through the valley of loneliness. I am like that. I used to think I was the only person in the world that could be around literally hundreds of people and still be lonely. I know now that I am in good company. So cry your tears and feel your loneliness, it is theraphy. And remember it is an emotion, and we have a choice in that. Choose not to be lonely and stand by it. It's not easy but it can be done. You packed a lot of feelings in four sentences, that is outstanding. Great work.

[Ralphy]

Wow, this write is so touching and unique I am just going to say this. The world should know you for your writing are out of this world. You capture a person's heart in an instant and transform them into your world like a flash of light. I could feel the strong emotions from this write "Silent Tear" and thought about the words, and phrases that signify harmony with your world. I especially loved the phrase "my heart flows a ocean of emotions" that broke the dam. Wonderful write.