war between brain and heart

sometimes the two parts
 which are brain and the heart
do the same thing at a same time
 but in different way

thinking is the part of brain
and feeling is of heart
both should be in a proportion
but when the heart feels more about something
the brain looses its thinking
it makes heart to understand
but the heart does not listen

at that time we think
that the world is spinning
like a top in our head
the decision made by only heart
or the brain
is anyhow always in vain
but when they both understand
and works together then every thing is alright again !

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

The heart wants what it wants even if our brain knows it is all wrong for us the heart always wins,Excellent poetry my friend :)

[vaishnavi]

thank you very much your reviews are sweet

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome :)

[Anahat]

I agree with Arzel Joy...
But it was nice...gud effort..:)

[vaishnavi]

thank u so much dear

[Blue]

I think this is best as a prose. But if you have a plan to make this into a better poem, I suggest adding figurative languages. Best wishes.

[vaishnavi]

oh thank you
i will surely make changes in it
glad that u liked it :D