Journey...

Journey...

A Poem by vaishnavi

Each one here is a traveler
the final destination of everyone is the same
but the ways are different
some get ways filled with happiness
some with sadness
some get their way filled with flowers
and some with thorns
some chooses a  companion to reach the destination
and some travels alone
each one has some or the other obstacles
but their numbers are less or more
on the way they meet with many changes
and of course challenges
on the way some walks like a king
and some like a clown
but at the destination
everybody is one
 
       -vaishnavi G

© 2014 vaishnavi


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you picked best metaphors for this wonderful write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

yea the comparisons made of life with journey....
it was pleasure to see that you like it :)
Fate? or destiny? It's all you - you paint your own life and choose what road to take. Love the meaning! Well-written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

thanks for appreciating this piece of writing ^_^
Mirra

10 Years Ago

Welcome :-)
Mirra

10 Years Ago

Welcome :-)
Same destination different journeys .. well written

Posted 10 Years Ago


vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

thanks for reading :)
sona

10 Years Ago

you're welcome
very nicely put together. very powerful message.

Posted 10 Years Ago


vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

thank you ranger and glad u too got the true meaning behind it :)
I like the meaning of it! Well gone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

thank u glad u liked it and got meaning behind it thank u very much :)
Wow I feel that this was so great and true.We are all ultimately headed to the same place but its just the routes that we take are different .Excellent pen my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

vaishnavi

10 Years Ago

thank you for such a lovely review vidya
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome hunny :)

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