Me and My Teddy Bear

Me and my Teddy Bear

When i was a child ,that time he was my best buddy
i used to share every thing with him
he was my favorite and i was his...
when i found him no around 
i used to get worried and when i saw him
a lovely smile came on my face
but i have grown up now
and still he is my favorite
no day of mine went without seeing him
i share every feelings with him
sadness and joy
love and hate
and i love him the most
i wish he was alive and could talk to me
but this fantasy will never come true
but still i feel when i lift him up in my arms
i see a beautiful smile on his face
because he is my teddy  bear
the best that no one could be
i love him and he loves me :)

Reviews

[Eve Ola]

i can relate too. Its awesome .keep sharing

[vaishnavi]

actually i talk with my teddy bear when i am alone it sounds little childish but from my childhood he was my best buddy so i have promised him that i will write a poem regarding to him and that's why i have written it glad to see that anyone relates it

[Eve Ola]

yeah i have the same story. When I was 4 years old papa bought a teddy bear that still i have n very dear to me .thanks for writing this :)

[vaishnavi]

wow its amazing u have spent lot of time with the bear i got my lucky bear when i was in 4th standard

[bikergirl3636]

make sure you captlise i to I really cute I can relate.

[vaishnavi]

oh yes, actually i write all this in hurry and sometimes i miss to capitalize the letters and put the punctuation marks..
by the way thanks for reviewing

[Saddam]

i wish he was alive and could talk to me
but this fantasy will never come true
but still i feel when i lift him up in my arms
i see a beautiful smile on his face
because he is my teddy bear.

If fantasy come true then every one have one. Lovely dear.

[vaishnavi]

thanks ssadd for this lovely review

[sona]

Every child's fantasy to have teddy bear talk back .. loved it ... well why wouldn't I ? I love my Teddy bear too

[vaishnavi]

thanks for this lovely review

[sona]

you're welcome

[Ranger Kessel]

creative. they never turn their back on you. nice write

[vaishnavi]

thanks lot ranger :)

[Emily]

Great idea for a poem! Well done!

[vaishnavi]

THANKS :)

[Cory Barrett]

Passing not judgment and always there with a hug. Best friend ever.

[vaishnavi]

thank you stream for this lovely words

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww this is a lovely poem about the teddy bear that is always there for you.You will never have to worry that you will need him and he won't be .Great pen Vaish :)

[vaishnavi]

thank you vidya for this beautiful review

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Vaish :)