Messed up life

A Poem by vaishnavi

sometimes things are very difficult for me
but some times they are so easy
sometimes world don't let me to be free
they try to keep be busy
but i would just like to be me
i cant tell what is wrong
but can tell nothing is right
some times there are challenges
and sometimes difficulties
every time i overcome them
and as i do so other challenge comes in front of me
i am fed up with all this
living with challenges and give the difficulties a kiss
some times i cant decide what to do
when there is no need that time it is everything which i can do
this life living with fears
always hiding the tears
no one to trust
life like iron with rust
floating on an endless sea
cant decide when i will be free
sometimes i decide to end up all this mess
all the life
but then i think that one day will come and heal everything
i am just living in hope
that any one will come to whom i could trust

© 2014 vaishnavi

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Mirra

Interesting piece :-) I like the subject but I think you need to check some misspelled words :-) Other than that this is well penned!

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

well when i write, i dont care bout spellings instead i let my thoughts go free and try to empty my .. read more

Parimal Pratyush

Very close to life. Amazing write. The presence of a very strong motivation is sensed. :) Great work.

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

thanks lot :)

Ranger Kessel

hope is priceless and I know how it is to not be yourself. I enjoyed the read and it's well written. thanks for sharing:)

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

very well said the hope is priceless
thanks for reading

Vidya Bacchus

This is so filled with anguish and sadness and a need to understand why you are alone without anyone you can trust.Really emotional poem Vaish and you are not alone :)
"i cant tell what is wrong
but can tell nothing is right" I love these two lines :)