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A Poem by Val Val

February 7, 2o1o / 1:14 am

Post, post, repost.
But then delete. Do
You want them to
Know everything?
Change names, change
Times. Do they know
About that one time
I said... Change everything.
Transparency is a
Luxury only fools
Have. A poem is a
Poem, fact or
Fiction, but words
Are words and words
Have vibrations. I
Feel yours from here.
Oops. Ignore that.
Type space enter enter
Delete delete delete
I censor my verse,
De-val-ing most phrases
Until I am clipped, dipped,
And fluffed into the show
Dog I feel like. But some
Nights, I win. And some
Nights, I win it all.

© 2010 Val Val


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yes,but at times it is difficuilt to wash laudry in public..censors win more often....

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i thing that clip delete that maybe censor you should clip ignore because if erase change change; but, it goes without post post words fluffed so you can censor to clip it all and no more censor Mr. Winston...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very charismatic flow to this piece... I really like this part...

but words
Are words and words
Have vibrations.

cause yes words do effect people, harsh words can hurt deep and positive words can inspire greatness.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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