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A Poem by Val Val

February 18, 2o1o / 6:3o pm

From one point
To the other. My
Formula is a set
One. My voice
No longer hitches
When I read. Waring
With the muses
Does no good.
I am taking notes.
I am an aside.
Tomorrow the
World might
Stop spinning
But I'll still be
Dizzy.

© 2010 Val Val

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Clockwork

I like your more spoken word style. I would try to make peace with the muses thought. At any rate I think the dizziness will end when one of those muses decides to speak.

Posted 14 Years Ago

SobrietyHaze

ooooopppppppphhhhhhh, my heads spinnin

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cest la vie

I echo Ed's remarks...

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

My voice
No longer hitches
When I read.

Good for you... not listening to the media but instead forming your own opinions. A lot of self assurance in this piece.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

GBU POETRY ONLY

Dizzy with creative juices, hopefully. Takin' notes can be..
Ware with the muses can pay off a lot of the times..
GBU

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ed Hart

You are not an aside. Stop that. It makes you dizzy.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 19, 2010
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Don't email me and demand I read and review your work. It's bizarre. Wake me if you like me, Wake me if you want me, Wake me if you need another poem. L'original style, au-del du blah bla.. more..