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March 3o, 2o1o / 3:1o pm

A cosmic joke
Is reflecting
Through my mirror.
Superimposed over
My face. I am a
Puppet for it's
Agenda. The best
I get these days
Comes in a tin can
And if you had any
Clue what is what
I could speak plainly,
Hand out the script,
Let you run your lines.
But you don't speak
This language, my love.
And if you go to sleep
Thinking that I'm wrong,
You're right. These words
Are logarithms and I know
You're not a mathematician.
My mistake was thinking you had
Some of the answers by now.

Reviews

[Alessander]

so ur dating a dense guy? lol "the best I get these days comes in a tin can" - I am now dense because I have NO idea what ur alluding to, but I just really like the line anyways. I also like "these words are logarithms an ur no mathematican" maybe u should rename this piece .o341... or whatever the hell pie is. Ok, that's the new and improved nicer Alessander lol

Oh, and is that the Dinasoaur from Peewees BIg Adventure?!

[fireblossom]

Human experience clearly written is a pleasure to read. Thank you.

[Emily B]

patterns, patterns everywhere

lessons we need to learn :)

[Alicante lullaby]

My mistake was thinking you had
some of the answers by now
well,i think its better when they dont have answers..coitus would be cool then besides,i mean...its okay to be naked but that much naked,letting the other person sift through you like all and all wont be fun.is it..good,he's not a mathematician.good you are a logarithm..

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I could feel the lines in this poem. The places I work try to control my ever move. I like the feel of the complete poem.' The ending was perfect. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Orlando Murcia]

My roommate is going through something like this

Her man or should I say boy is very selfish and isn't treating her

like how he should

Great write, Needed to be said

[Juliette Cross]

Val! This is smooth and rough at the same time. Its like sitting on silk and being lacerated by a jagged tin can. I likey. Just the use of the word math in a poem has always fascinated me. Its so the opposite of poetry that it is somehow beautiful as it is being thrust into that foreign world.

[cest la vie]

Ed's advice is on-point..
your writing is on point-
so this whole poem is on point..
I love how honest youe write..

[Ed Hart]

correct your mistakes in an absolute and unequivocal manner...then don't make the same mistakes again...yeah, it hurts, but it's the kind of hurt that can heal...