Building Improvement

Building Improvement

A Poem by Varin
"

Still in progress

"

 

 

Filing away action

in particular thought formation

 bred by ambition,

 of a pack mentality.  humanism inbreeds the natural

Inclination to fulfill a realization only satisfied 

justified and ratified

in   the net Gross.

 

Industrialization

Aspires to build upon 

Improvement

 Increasing Energies dedicated

   to our development

  to the effeiciency in productivity.

 

Less labor means more leisure if

we still find convenience in using

all

these wonderfull things. perhaps will inspire

us

to create?

more time to relax and really,

focus on matters of importance to a world

asspiring.

 

ASPIRING

global success seems awfully attainable when you break it down into steps

all over

people

of the world crushing

all,

   in pursuit

we find habitualistic errors

we find habitualistic errors

we find habitualistic errors

 

and again we rip them out.

 

FIX IT

 

 

 

 

to succeed in order,

we substantiate in steps,

 we can take

to amount to something greater than all

the raw costs 

 and the habitualistic error

 and the habitualistic error 

 and the habitualistic error

     of  running over it again and again until what is real becomes absurdity

majestified, by the unattainable

ideals

we have replaced with the wonder of new things to keep us

 true  to the importance of developing new things.

things

we need to aspire

tangibility

in our things more valuable than

origins abstract and irrelevant and crushed under the power of one....

 

 To improve life for all in production of 

  all                    

     these great things

these important things found

 our leisure and convenience. 

 

We are amounting to more.

more

by adding, things

and time taken from  the people

it crushed for the greater good  of this organization.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                       

 

© 2010 Varin


Author's Note

Varin
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Varin
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A Poem by Varin