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Ashamed Lord Dracula

Ashamed Lord Dracula

A Poem by Vinod Kumar U K
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No need to dark

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Dark new moon day

Lord started to preparing

The tide gown wampire teeth

And the all costumes

 

Slowly entered the street

With the back ground of

Owl`s song and frezing cold

Blinking red points

 

The streets and the villas

the lonley driven cars

and the mountain of cemitry

Nothing to find out

 

Early morning wake up

With Horrible sound of fire

Streets turned blood river

Lord realy ashamed

 

He opened his eyes

In his nest of banned day time

All human are drinking playing

And swimming in BLOOD.

© 2011 Vinod Kumar U K


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Wow, quite the awesome read here, I really enjoyed this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A very different way of looking and explaining what one see's with the minds eye not an easy thing for anyone to do nice work Vinod.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eery. Great last line!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice haunting imagery I get whilst reading, great penning :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


we are the monsters.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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not sure if the wampire was a typo..liked the poem..but that kinda distracts the reader..

Posted 9 Years Ago


wampire, frezing cold, are these typos, or an interesting choice in linguistics? Not dissing your poem. It was very creative. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dracula! haha great great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


interesting poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Vinod Kumar U K
Vinod Kumar U K

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