Poetry Lost

Poetry Lost

A Poem by Tara

My voice is strangled.
Without wings, it only whispers.
Behind rosy cheeks
I am ghost pale and blue lipped.
This supple skin is not mine.
I am old, wrinkled
brittle boned
dull eyed.
I splinter and I burn.
I’ve lost my poetry.

© 2008 Tara


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The poetry is your essence, that much is clear.

You put on a brave face - 'rosy cheeks' - but beneath it all, your vitality has been sapped by the loss.

A touching piece about passion and the loss of it. And the physical description can't possibly be you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me sad, but we can never lose our voice
and our ability to emote and communicate somehow.
Therefore we can't lose the most beautifull thing about us,
our minds and our 'poetry'
We get older and wiser and you have beauty far beyond your years

J.P.O.et

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tara
Tara

Long Island, NY



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