Just Coincidence..?

Just Coincidence..?

A Poem by Veronica
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A mirror poem inspired by the idea of coincidence.

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First Side:

On the Internet,

I met a boy my age.

We laughed at each other’s jokes,

And we talked every night.

He was everything I loved,

Just like him…

Was it coincidence?  

Second Side:

Was it coincidence…?

Just like him.

He was everything I loved,

And we talked every night.

We laughed at each other’s jokes.

I met a boy my age,

On the Internet.

© 2012 Veronica


Author's Note

Veronica
Please tell me what you think. It's a bit rushed, I know.

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No its not rubbish. I really like it. It is short but it very nice to read and has a great flow. I loved the idea behind this poem as well. Your a very good writer

Posted 5 Years Ago


It's great, somewhat like mirror poetry where every word is reversed. I really liked your work,keep it up :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Why am I just now seeing this?

Anyway, a year and a half later, it's better than ever. Me gusta muchísimo, mi amor. ♥

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Veronica

7 Years Ago

How did I just now see this. xD Dude, thank you.

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Added on June 11, 2012
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Tags: Levi, Nick, Internet, Alike, Coincidence

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