Haiku - first set.

A small collection of my first Haiku endeavors.

 

Flame quietly sparks

a brand new dawn for hopefuls –

Yet yesterday burns.

 

 

The warm brook speaks of

Bubbling effervescence,

to the silent sky.

 

One who fears the light

is one of a wintry soul -

that begs the sun's leave.

 

the formless water,

that delightfully freezes -

to become more firm.

Reviews

[He@ther!]

Wow, these are all pretty impressive:)
Very well done:)

-Heather:)

[HeartsBinded]

Very, very, very nice.


I like them all, especially the first two.

They are all wonderful, but may i suggest that you replace "of" in the third one with "with". Of is correct, there is nothing wrong with it, but "with" sounds good too, and is still just the one syllabl.

It sounds wonderful either way:)

Delightful work:)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Nicely done. Well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah