O My Nation

My Message For Baloch Nation, Doesn't Matter Where They Live, We All Are Baloch. Let's Get United

O My Nation!

 

O the people of Balochistan

O the children of Chakar!

 

When your blood is shed

You shall realize your value

 

The value and prestige

Which you have from birth

 

The value of your land

Which is under the evil rule

 

O the sons of Nauroz!

Wake up! Wake up!

 

Wake up for your motherland

Who need you, only you

 

Your voice tears the sky

Your fear shivers the land

 

O the children of Gohram

Your courage is today’s need

 

Your veins are full of loyalty

Your blood has faith in it

 

O the children of Mehrab!

Never let your blood go in vain

 

Your martyrs’ are your heroes

Their blood is your pride

 

O the sisters of Sammo!

You are the builders of the nation

 

This land needs your sons

The braveness and courage of your sons

 

O the Baloch nation!

Wake up! Wake up!

 

You owe this land

You owe this soil

 

O the people of Balochistan!

Wake up! Wake up!

Author's Note

I need your aidvices and suggestions.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"You owe this land
You owe this soil
O the people of Balochistan!
Wake up! Wake up"
I like the energy and the reasons for the poem. I like the feel of pride and unity in the words. You said enough to make your point. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry and words.
Coyote

[Vsh Baloch]

Thank You..

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Rene Salinas]

Well, with lines like this it is a little tricky to offer advice. See the theme is so strong and current many people won't realize the impact of the province unless they look into it. Nearly 50% of Pakistan yet only very few people actually live there in comparision to the rest of the country surrounded by nearly 10 different communities of people with relatively different takes on life and hence the liberation army.

It is full of challenges that's for sure.

Thankyou

[Vsh Baloch]

You are right but still most of the international community knows.

Thank you