Hate

As the tear falls down my face,
Im hoping its the last tear of its kind.
I want the pain i feel to stop,
And be washed away.
I want my blood to run cold.
To lose the heat from my body.
My heart once was full of love,
But now its no longer a heart,
It beats deep down in my cheats,
But it beats a blackness of hate you've never seen.
I'm breaking down to the point where i can't go back.
Back to the way i was,
And I'm sure I can't live like this for much longer.

Reviews

[Morgan Yai]

This is such an impactful way of describing hate. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing. You have a lovely writing style. Keep up the good work

[Kevin]

Super dark. You have good flow and I like the wording. Thanks for sharing.