Sea Trance

Sea Trance

A Story by Humor Me
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About The Sea Of What I Felt When I Was Listening To Trance !

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The Sea

 

Why is it so vast…..why so silent...

What Does It Say to Us…Why Does the Heart Feel like It’s connected….

So Beautiful…So Divine…your Soul Feels like its Already Been There…

Wish I could see what This Silk of A Sea is..underneath it…

Smells So Fresh That You Are Fully Lifted up from every side….

You Don’t Feel Like You Are On The Ground….

 

Every wave every time you touch it you…you feel calm

You don’t exactly touch it...but you feel it...this feeling you just had…never goes away….

So mesmerizing…such innocence…where would you find it…nowhere…

You just keep looking at it and yet when you take your eyes of the sea...you still feel incomplete….

 

The air around the sea sweeter than your aroma…everything shines on the sea…the moon priceless

The sun fragile…..the moments you wouldn’t let pass by…it doesn’t take time to make

You feel part of it…the wind it blows so chilling…capture each and every detail…for there is no place like the sea....

Grasping me…My soul…My Life…My Heart…My Dreams…the trance is amazing…The silence you deserve for all of it is worth it enjoy while it lasts long….

© 2012 Humor Me


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thanks a lot guys :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I've said it before but After reading this I have to go visit the beach again. The timelessness and power of the waves is portrayed brilliantly in this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i would want this experience to last...maybe in an afterlife.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

woah!!! ur desciptions are so SO real nd nice :) its a really pretty piece of poetry... keep it up :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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