Im so disgusted in you I could puke.

Im so disgusted in you I could puke.

A Poem by watch_the_world

You disgust me,
I want to tear your heart out
and stomp it on the ground,
shatter it to a million pieces
just like you did to hers.

You lied to her
you know you did.
What you don't know is
I have proof of your "little"
lie.

She already knows everything,
and she's still with you after
all of this.
Wow she puts up with a
lot of s**t.

Be grateful you have her,
cause before you know it
She'll be gone...
Just.
Like.
That.

She's giving you a chance,
take advantage of that.
Most girls wont give you
another chance.

Once a liar always a liar,
Once a cheater always a cheater,
People never change.

© 2010 watch_the_world


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Wow...I LOVEthis one its amazing! Thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this was an amazing write. I don't think that a guy should lie and then have the girl still with him. She doesn't deserve someone that was a lying to her. She could have found someone else in a heart beat. But she stayed with a filthy liar. I think this was good though. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love you!!XD this is amazing

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this. It's pessimistic, but in a pretty way, if that makes sense. It has a sense of wonder to it, as I think about how the person who wrote it must feel towards these types of relationships and problems, but it's underlying and not just blunt. This is great. :).

Posted 13 Years Ago


nice.. especially the title

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a very powerful poem, but I agree with Jami Nicole.
It seems unfinished.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Panda, who is this about? I really like this poem but it feels a tad bit unfinished, maybe that's just me though. Anyways, keep up the good writing.

Love, Jami

Posted 13 Years Ago



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