Just another day

Everyday is the same

Nothing changes.

Same feelings

Sleep can't fix.

 

I wonder what there is to life.

Nothing ever seems to last.

 

What defines us as alive?

What defines us as human?

What's the point?

 

Emotions,

feelings.

Never ending cycle of

up and down,

down and up.

Its tiring.

 

I just want to be done.

 

Author's Note

venting.

Reviews

[Sweets]

This is so sad and great!
I loved how you ended the poem with "I just want to be done"
Great work! :)

[Luke Ritta]

good work........I liked this very much.

[李[A]]

Ah, this poem describes a lot of about what I feel. This is a great example of how poetry has such an aboveboard display of thematic ideals. The flow in general seems to go very fluidly with a slight awkwardness at the end of the second to last stanza's last line. I did feel as though your last sentence summed up the title and the piece and that the overall structure of the poem was great. Thanks for sharing your rant!

[gymnasticsgirl-101]

Wow! This is amazing I love it! Keep writing Manda! :)