(55) The Spider

(55) The Spider

A Poem by Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

I saw a horrible spider crawl,

All down my bedroom wall.

Staring with eight beady eyes,

Giving me a terrible surprise.




With eight legs, hairy and black.

And three red dots upon his black.

He stayed there, looking at me,

I am sure he had a smile I could see.




So I shouted for my dad.

He look a look and went mad.

"I'm not touching that, It's all hairy",

"Take a look, it's too scary".




So we all packed and moved away.

I wonder if the spiders' still there today.

Because now in our new house,

I have just seen a mouse.



copyright Chris Smith 1999

© 2011 Chris Smith Welshpoetcs


Author's Note

Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
This was written the same time as the Black Kitten poem, written for my daughter. (This was her favourite, with her fear for spiders).

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haha, i love it! that would totally be me because i HATE spiders

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved this Chris. :) LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so cute! love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

aww how sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is so cute. loved it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We have one poisonous spider in Michigan. It is small and pretty. If it bite you. Your body part will swell up like a balloon. Spiders are good for the control of nature. But some can create fear. A very good story. I have no fear of spiders. I know many people who do. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very cute. I happen to like spiders and wouldn't have moved away :) Definitely a great read for little ones. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've "spun" a good one, here, Chris--for all us kids.
Enjoyed it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha....you can run but you can't hide!! One of the few humorous poems I like, a keep for when I have kids!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I would have moved too! I hate spiders. We have black widows here, and I'm always afraid of coming across them when doing the spring yard cleanup. Creepy write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chris Smith Welshpoetcs
Chris Smith Welshpoetcs

Cardiff until 2004, then Hemel Hempstead, Hertfordshire, United Kingdom



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Started writing in 1997 after a horrible attack, I found it theraputic and wrote a range of poems and short horror stories. Started sharing on the Web firstly with Yahoo 360 in 2005, then sites on .. more..

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