Double Love

Double Love

A Poem by whatwhatnow?
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Inspired by a situation an old friend was involved with. Bless him.

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Living two lives, What a f**k up this is.
Two Girls
Same words
One choice to make

If I choose dedication
I'm the bad guy. 
Period.

If I choose to forgive
I'm the hypocrite
Weak.

She's so beautiful
But hell, she scared.
Speechless and soo f*****g
Frustrating.
Annoying
A freak.

She's so fit, 
but b***h, she's Dominating.
Opinionated and soo f*****g 
Frustrating.
Agitating.
A constant.

© 2012 whatwhatnow?


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Goodness directly powerful,
enjoyed

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was really good and an confusing crisis, I hope your friend made the best decision possible. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


a cute little crisis. i like it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


There's a few errors like you wrote she, instead of he, and you forgot to put that this was wrote for me, and dave. But hey i'll forgive :D Seriously though this is quite good mate :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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whatwhatnow?
whatwhatnow?

Darlington, Durham, United Kingdom



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