A reflection of movement

 

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I like the headline so much! Reflection of movement can give me so many associations and thoughts! your poem is remarkable, with great lines, and rhymes! Really instead to "talk" or do something worse, if we have deep pain inside, the better way is always creativity, where the good and bad emotions could complete mission and empty our broken hearts... Whatever we regret in life, is something which we choose, after that our way is not going back again, but we will come again to the same test one day! I love the positive end of that piece : "to bear a better seed of the contended tomorrow".

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25.08.013

[Pax]

your as insightful as ever my dear friend...hugs...
hope your doing good...
and yes, processing those negative energies towards creativity is another way in handling pain...
thank you, my dear friend..

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. The ever wise Mr. Pax at his best and brightest. All good to quote and very true and relevant to the human journey.
Into my library dear friend...Splendid...:)

[Pax]

thanks my friend... It's already a great honor you think i am in my best... it's a pleasure to be your friend... cause i know i can learn from you... my words-smith friend... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha. We both inspire each other...You are welcome...:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we can write our way into contentment...at least in this piece i see hope of that...

i really like the wording in this piece...the movement of it..."to snore a better forever more"

that is quite a creative line...imaginative and telling...some people sleep through life in order to not get hurt...but what they miss is life...

they need to wake....your pen helps to wake those who read you...the philosophy is educational for your readers to ponder.

[Pax]

i am glad you find it educational...
it is always an honor when you come and read my verses my friend...
thank you so much...