a star won't glow

 

I wish for the star to shine,

Yet it won’t glow for me,

Unlucky.

Author's Note

to be delete soon...
okay, I'll just hide it afterwards........

thank you for reading...
i just feel so sad that i can't even write it longer...

Reviews

[Michael G.]

I like this short poetic thought. I guess we all wish upon a star to shine from time to time. And most are disappointed when the glow doesn't reach our expectations. The difference I think, is in what we do next.
This reveals a different side of you that I surely knew was there; but, never considered.
Not the unlucky part. That I knew. That's karma. We all have karma working for or against us. Not much we can do about that.
But the "wishful" side, is a side you closely guard, my dear friend. It is a very real human condition that can be both good and positive in our lives and at the same time be a negative. It is for us to decide how we use them.
So I'm going to be a little wishful here and wish this very human poem is not deleted or even hidden. It is a reminder perhaps, on how we should look upon things we see, not only with our eyes, but with our hearts. Excellent work, Pax.

[Marie]

It doesn't need to be longer. THis sad little poem make its point.

[Pax]

Thank you, Marie, my friend.... I am glad it work as a poem itself rather than a rant to the stars. I am grateful, always.

[Baby Ricochet]

Stars can be real sons of b*****s sometimes. Hang tight Mr Pax as this too shall pass

[Pax]

Thank you, my good friend... I hope so too, hoping....

[Sami Khalil]

Luck is where opportunity meets preparation. I think you are so lucky for you have gifts and you have good friends on this site or I might call them fans. You might be down on your luck now but remember that God never leaves us nor forsakes us. Long live Pax...:).................

[Pax]

that warms the heart of this sad soul, dear brother & friend, I thank you whole heartedly... I still lucky to have everyone here, my friends... despite all my worries and fears... thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...................

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

[emmajoy]

Pax, you have such a wonderful gift with words, you make your Cafe friends both weep and smile with you - truly. Please somehow from somewhere find just a little something smiley and write some joy into your life. It's not easy, goodness no.. but.. step strong, dear Friend.. step forward.

[Pax]

Thank you, i will, i will.... in someday, someday..... for now I am wearing the ducktaped smiles...

[emmajoy]

Of course you will; travel life day by day and - hopefully, dear friend. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i sure wish it would shine for you, Pax...
this is so sad.

[Pax]

thank you so much, my friend...
how sad I am, it really shows in this piece...
I can't thank you enough for your support...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hmnnnn...........
Wag na e-delete.

[Pax]

Salamat sa supporta, pretty friend, I just feel so sad at masakit din yung likod ko, nag chill ako ka gabi sa lamig... nagkakasakit na ako..huhu

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

We cannot have all that we want in life...that's the sad reality. But I do believe that "Seek and you shall find". Prayer is powetful. When we ask, God will give something to us if we really deserved it.
Faith matters.