Drawing

Drawing

A Poem by Pax

Every Part
         Every Stroke
                  Every Line
                           Every Curve
                                    Every Shape
           To start somewhere
           and everything else
                         will follow.

© 2012 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
its my reflection on how to sketch.
just remember that every line of every part of the subject is connected.
an old poem july 2011
this image is an old photo of me(THE YOUNG ME) doing some painting with my friend
i miss the old me, maybe because i dont do painting or even sketching work as for the moment.

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This is a very expressive short piece. It makes such sense in the context you have set it and it has great emotion and passion is such a short space. I don't know your painting but your poetry is painting with words. We all need to reflect but do not let reflection drown you in the sea of mirrors!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax

12 Years Ago

sea of mirrors!
lovely words...I will take your advise Mr. John, thank you...



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Simple yet original..nicely written William..brilliant! :)

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Brilliant poem! I loved the format in which this poem is written. I could imagine a hand painting a picture...keep writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I really enjoy sketching and I feel like you have captured some of the essence of it within this poem. I agree with this line "to start somewhere and everything else will follow" ... Thank you for sharing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This could be about lovemaking, or any other from of art.
Excellent, my freind

Posted 12 Years Ago


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"To start somewhere
and everything else
will follow" ~ very clever write...I find multiple layers within this stanza. I also like the format of this piece...nicely done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Interesting


Posted 12 Years Ago


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wow.. I like sketching... it is my hobby.. short but well explained :) thanks for sharing
- Kuhr Gred

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