She Who Was.

She would breathe in the nothing
and exhale whole galaxies. 

An artist by nature, 
her blood laced with creation; 
flowing from her fingertips 
to the beat of the clockwork
that was her life.

Reviews

[Strawberry Evil]

It's short, but I love it. Really powerful and full of feelings. You clearly have a good style to write with, makes me want to read more of your things. I really like the first two lines, somehow they feel really touching to me, can't really explain why! :D
But yes, over all, very good job, keep it up!

[Indra Neil]

vivid imagery in this profound brevity! Congrats! :)

[Willard Wells]

Very nice work. I don't believe I have read anything of yours before, but I expect now I will keep and eye out. Short verse is my favorite.

[William Gardner]

good. They want me to write 25 letters.

[Alexanda Corrin]

I love your writing style, I find it very unique and refreshing. I enjoy that you were able to quickly and masterfully portray someone in a sense that I understand them and can feel a personal relation with the words you used, even though they seem a bit hard to relate to. The poem overall is very interesting, I can't wait to read more of your works!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you used the words. Create strength of person and powerful visions with so few words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote