who knows me better than me

 

who knows me better than myself,

 

you do,you do,you-------do--------

 

surely i was blessed,

 

the day i happened upon you--ooo,

 

i know how i know ,

 

i can be so complicated,

 

at times,

 

always following my heart,

 

neglecting my mind,

 

never the less you stand,

 

stead fast by Ur mans side,

 

i know i hurt you,

 

 

i know my mistakes of not thinking,

 

often hurt Ur feelings,

 

isn't  it just like love,

 

to endure all things,

 

hope for all things,

 

even in  a dream,

 

you are my real,

 

from  you i can't hide no-nooooo,

 

nor conceal my emotions,

 

when it comes to you,

 

they always come shinning Thu,

 

some times this old world ,

 

gets the best of me,

 

tearing me down,

 

with it's many changes ,

 

and turn around,

 

 

only because of you,

 

i can find the will ,

 

to make it on Thu,

yes it's true this man ,

 

is affectionately in love,

 

with you,

 

and all you do,

 

now my love let me lay you down,

 

give you what you give me,

 

the best in love ,

 

no u wont need those cloths,

 

in fact to be exact,

 

you look better in the nude,

 

each and every time i share ,

 

myself with you,

 

and those sounds you make,

 

when I'm putting the icing on the cake,

 

just blows me away,, aaahhh say it ,

 

baby sing it,

 

i wanna hear it ,

 

ooohh   say it ,i wanna hear it

 

Baby, can I help you fly,

But not away from me.

I want what's best for you,

But fear what that might be.

There is no paradox

More difficult than this:
That I would die for you,
Yet not give up your kiss.

Baby, please do not mind my madness;
Fly bravely, if you must:
I will watch you, happy in your joy,
And teach my heart to trust.
Love you and miss you soooooo much.

 

ooooh baby baby,

 no-one has ever wooo  me,

like you do,no,no,no,

never,ever,

i love you for it,

i love,love,love ,

say it baby oooooo  aaaah,

I'm so turned on,

i"m creaming don't wake me,

if i am only dreaming,,,peace wizthom   wisemanspeeks@protected

Reviews

[wizthom]

with me i tell the whole story,,as with most they only tell parts,
u say u would find it interesting to read me without the lust,
since when has showing affection become a lust ,
perhaps you should try to make a little more love ,
to free up the cob webs on your soul,,
any way thanks for ur review and opinions,,peace wizthom

[Li Li]

I think your work would come across a lot stronger without the double spacing. You give pauses when you use this format when, I believe, there shouldn't be any pauses. I am confused on what "Thu" means. I thought it could have been a typo when I first saw it, but then you used it more than once the same way.

A person always knows who they are more than any other person could. Nobody else has walked your path of life with you from beginning to end besides yourself. At times, we believe another person may know who we truly are, then in the end, there is still so many rocks that remain unturned.

I would be interested in seeing you speak without the lust.... see the side of you that isn't so sexual. This was a very open meaningful write. When I read it, I do sense longing and desire. Then, I sense weakness when I get to this side of you that is always "laying down". You started off so serene, then in the middle it's as if the mood changed.... from the initial intentions.

You have a romantic heart it seems. This is what encourages the ink to spread on the paper.

Bless!
Li