i tried

sometimes people will let whatever stand in the way, of truce in their life

 

YOUR SOUL IS  LOST,YOUR MIND IS  CONFUSED,PERHAPS  that's why   WE CAN'T FIND TRUCE.
your  battles have became your war,,
the things you say are the reflection of that person u refuse to see.
see!? do you see it's not me
rest assure it is not me.

i tried

to be a better friend than those  you  may have known,

i tried,

 reaching out  my hand to help you stand,
your past  blinds you, your mind confuses you,
false pride rules you
paranoia will not  let you understand,
 what a true   woman  commands,
so you will never   comprehend this  man,
i tried,
to dry your eyes,
i tried,
 to shelter the love you hide,
i tried ,
to show you in life one never dies,
i tried ,
to show you how to rejoin your true form,
but like the physical realm who only believes 

in Gods they see,
things they can touch but never feel,
i tried ,
to show you  only in spirituality,
can you know truth understanding ,
reality in dreams the essence ,
of love all the joy it brings

i tried yes i did ...peace wizthom

Author's Note

why do we let pride stand in the way of understanding others
THINGS THAT ARE BROKEN
ARE THINGS THAT DON'T WANT T BE FIXED,,THATS WHAT THE WRITE WAS ABOUT.
THANKS FOR STOPPING BY MY LOVE ,,PEACE WIZTHOM

Reviews

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

all too true. Because when something broken, wants to be fixed, it'll fix itself (hypothetically). Life is all about learning to fix yourself and trying not to be too dependent on others. If you WANT to stay broken you will, if you WANT to be fixed you will do it yourself. Nothing can keep you broken but yourself.

JJ

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[shadadakiya]

that was beautiful!!!hugs

[shadadakiya]

great write!!!

[wizthom]

why is that my writes people take so personal,that must be a writers dream,
touch another soul,heart .spirit. with words ,however u never gave it a review,,lol ..thanks peace wizthom

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

You can't fix whats' not broken. I am really a happy person and have much love coming my way.