Your Cure

 

 

is nothing but

plain and simple

TRUTH.

 

it's up to you

whether or not

you choose to use it

choose to move out of this

stagnant mire that holds you back

tricks you into believing you are a complete man

cons you into thinking you are making love and being loved

 

addiction

when I first said that word

I was halfway joking

now I see

you are addicted

and this is serious

this has become your lifeblood

 

the cure for you

is nothing more

than hearing these words

and choosing to wake up.

 

 

I have yet to see

what's the cure for me

all I know is

we cured one another

don't laugh

you don't understand

how deep that story really goes.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Firesong]

I'm assuming WOWcrack....

The poem, however, instantly speaks to me of bitterness and betrayal. I can just imagine the person speaking these words standing there and shaking their head softly.

I can also imagine the isolation of the addict it's directed at, understanding or perhaps not understanding the seriousness of the situation. Believing it's all fun and games until it's too late.

My ten cents.

[Kelley]

I can feel the pain in this one and I also see the the love
you show for this person. Beautiful write thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Teenage poet]

Yeah well sucks to be betrayed. And expressing it like that. Well it made it all worth while. Yeah love can suck at times. But when you express your pain when something devistating happens makes everything a little bit better in the world. For you can compare your feelings with other peoples feelings of what could have had the same thing happen to them.....

Amazing talen though. Very well written. Nice job.

[Ray Hamilton]

True love fuels the body with endless power
It's a heart breaker when it turns sour
Well penned
Ray { Not a Poet }

[Heavy Metal Love (she'..]

haha thanks coolone I agree with you! drama free is the way to go. you're funny-

[thecoolone52]

ehy i read your profile and i havent really gotten into any of that cowboy guy's stuff so i dont really know what its all about............ but anyway i like the poem..... but i dont know the whole deal and i hope to keep it that way hahahaha anyway nice write