That Night

That Night

A Poem by wolfsshadow25

Wile you pretend nothing happened, i sit and wonder if what

you said was true. If what we experienced was true. Wile

you sleep cosily in your bed rapped up in blankets i stay up

wondering if it was all real. But it seems as though you used

me for your own personal gain. To fill what you missed, the

wanting of love, the passion, and the since of being with

someone. So now as you fly away i sit here hurting and

wondering if was real..... it all seemed real to me. The hurt

will never go away until i get the answer i want. So now wile

you read this i sit and think of the time we spent together, if

you feel the same sparrows as i do.

© 2009 wolfsshadow25


Author's Note

wolfsshadow25
This about some one you know who you are and ya i still have this up.......As for the others don't worrie about it..

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I like it...very emotional...and sometimes that does happen...wondering if it is true or not.
Great Job :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


great written, very emotional.
really good job.
thanks for sharing this nice and sad poem.

Akina

Posted 14 Years Ago


oh my gosh i love this!! nice jbo!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


well im not sure exactly who this is for but tho it is nicely writen it seems that u feel (or felt dependeding on when u wrote this) the same way i do. i wonder all the time and ask myself those same queastions about u. but iv figured out that u cant hold onto the past becuase it will only ruin the presant

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on March 6, 2009

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wolfsshadow25
wolfsshadow25

every were and no were, RI



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my name is Deven, and i write because of a friend who got me back into writing. She means alot to and i cant wait to see her again just to say good bye.... i know it will be hard for us but hay im not.. more..

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