shouting LOVE silently

shouting
                  LOVE
silently
in most indirect
unmanner
across gaping
expansively
unechoing
carpeted floor
of semi-living room
        (soundlessly
she smiles)

Reviews

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~ absolutely gorgeous poetry... ravishing beyond measure, monsieur...

[A.G Franke]

smiling....just that sign can show your crazy about somone and thier crazy bout you. good right mate.

[Jeremy Wyatt]

Cracking write Joel! x LOVE!I am more Shhhhh..... love....tip toe away before she sees me..

[Judy Ponceby]

The essence of love doesn't require sound. This is beautiful Joel.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Oh the love that can be found in a smile, especially one that reaches from the eyes........lovely Joel!

[Lily Mae]

I find this to be an interesting write for this current time in my life.. It's the un and the silence and soundlessly that I guess are shouting the loudest:) ahh :) xx Great write as always Joel..xx

[ju]

hey, that's good! very simple and i love the "unwords" too. semi-living room as opposed to semi living-room: clever.

[FJ Davis]

Always enjoy the melding of contradictions and the statement of understatement.
Message sent and received; successful communication--for the poem's subjects and its readers.
Excellent work, Joel.