Always

3 rd place in the romance contest

You`ve always been

my inspiration

 

You`ve always been

the special one in my life

 

That's why I asked you

to be my wife

 

Sometimes I guess

I let you down

when you need me the most

I`m not around

 

But were not perfect

and never will be

 

That's why you are you

and I am me

 

But you`re the love

of my life and always will

 

Even though I don`t say it

that's how I feel...

Reviews

[lightsong]

sometimes love and romance need to be said and reassured with simplicity of words. I wish I can write like You with simple yet touchingly beautiful words, no wonder this in a third place, it reaches every reader's heart.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[θεά]

A no-holds barred serenade to one who seems to truly deserve your love and commitment. A minor nitpick- it should be you're the lovd and not your the love. Otherwise this is top-notch.

P.S. was this part of your wedding vows?

Best,
M.

[wordman]

thank you,not part of vows,just a poem
i seem to always use your in the wrong way

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'Always'
wordman,
Love waits, love gives, love simply loves and is. It is such an amazing thing because we humans all have flaws and they come out at different times and test all of us. this poem shows how love is a decision and not simply a loose and weak sense but a choice.
Well done with good explanation.
Kathy

[wordman]

thank you kathy,i guess this is the way it should be

[Kathy Van Kurin]

That's right. You poem was simply real and simply honest......Yup, just the way it should be. Stay well and inspired.
Kathy

[wordman]

you mean stay dry,lol we are flooded here

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Oh my goodness no. I am so sorry. Yes, absolutly stay dry dear friend and know I am thinking of you there. Bless your heart. Kathy

[wordman]

8 inches so far and still coming

[Angel of the devil]

the is amazing, and beautiful. I love this

[wordman]

thank you for the review,i appreciate it !

[Angel of the devil]

welcome, wordman

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This is awesome :) Love it when a man is in touch with his feelings and knows how to express them :)

[wordman]

thank you lynn !

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Congrats on the contest....another great romantic write!

[wordman]

you should enter some,we have a thousand,a friend told me if you enter enough you will eventually win one,i did

[AaronFreitas]

This is a beautiful write... number 1 in my romance contest buddy!