That Moment in Time

A moment in time

funny how it can

last a life time

A lost love

a first kiss

a moment in time

that you will always reminisce

Your first date

your first time

memories you keep

tucked away in your mind

Some times when your alone

you reminisce of all the memories

that you have known

You dream of all the things you miss

you wish you could go back in time

and re capture that moment in time...

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

A lost love
a first kiss
a moment in time
that you will always reminess

A very relatable piece for me, Ron. But reminess? Do you mean reminisce?

[Aethereal]

Yes if we could only go back and do it all again in an endless time-loop. Your second verse inspired me to write the following gift song-poem which you may keep as your own: Sing along:

Two Lovebirds

There was a time for loving,
there was a time for kissing
when we where turtledoving;
but now we’re reminiscing.

[Brittany Zedalis]

I really relate to this poem. Awesome work!!

[Taylor_McCutcheon]

you reminess of all the memories---on all the memories

Great poem. You're very good.

[MsJewel]

...and it is those moments that we hold close to our heart forever. Sweet and romantic - the perfect love poem Ron.

:) Julie

[stars are far]

That was WOW.. that was very amazing..
I actually wait for your writings..i love them..