Lost In Your eyes

 

Reviews

[Astrid]

Lovely, romantic poem ~

Notes:
"You kiss me [and]
{m}y journey begins
as your sweet lips
touche mine"
[] = add
or
{} = capitalize
and
= omit

In the following stanza: inhibitions*

[wordman]

thank you astrid for your visit,i will edit

[B.J]

That is bordering on erotic, but it is so gentle and flowing. loved it

[wordman]

that's about as clos to erotic as I get,if I got tore loose I could write a x rated romance novelread morethat's about as clos to erotic as I get,if I got tore loose I could write a x rated romance novel
thanks

[B.J]

Hahahahaha.. :)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[sonnie ibadah]

"...You kiss me
my journey begins..." this expresses the sweet promises of a beginning romance were everything feels new and exciting. beautifully expressed!

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[sonnie ibadah]

you are welcome

[Sami Khalil]

"My heart beats
in rhythm with yours
as my soul entwines

My body swaying
like a leaf blowing
in the wind"

[wordman]

well sami,a suprise and welcomed visit,thank you

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:)..................

[stars are far]

wow, that was so romantic and very greatly expressed, you did a great work penning this...well done

[wordman]

thank you very much,glad you visited

[Tiana]

Been enjoying your beautiful poetry ...

[wordman]

and i thank you for reading my poetry

[Fran Marie]

A lovely piece of poetry..expressing a gentle loving romance..nicrely penned..

[wordman]

your visit was a pleasure fran,thank you

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

One of my favorite songs by Debbie Gibson among others
I love she plays
I listened to her music over again as a child
and Gloria Estefani and Amy Grant I Listened to a lot of Tiffany
they were both from the 80's and 90's era I miss the 80's guess you could say
a simper time for me and a bunch of other different Artist and music .



this was lovely and brings back memories
of my childhood I had tears in my eyes,
thank you for sharing my friend.



Thank you for your kind review
and comments you left on my page.



Blessings. Benita

[wordman]

thank you for reading,i appreciate your comments and you are more than welcome
i love 80,s music as far as i am concerned the music died after the 80,s

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

yes much of it did but I still listen to it I grew up on it hard to put down what you loved listening to as a child :) Thank you for sharing You're welcome my friend. Benita