No Flowers,No Candy

No Flowers,No Candy

A Poem by wordman
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No flowers
no candy
can i give

But these sweet words
i freely give
no wisdom,no great knowledge
do i have to bestow

But there`s one thing you should know
i will always love you so
you`ve been my mom through thick or thin
and you`ve always been there when i needed a friend

Eventhough you sleep in the arms of angels
it makes me feel better if a card i can write
so happy mothers day mom, from me to you
and mom ,i will always love you...

© 2016 wordman


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Wonderful tribute to your mother. I feel the same WM. Just one small observation, change the first stanza 'give' to 'offer' to eliminate the repetition?

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thanks john appreciate the review
Awesome!
Very sweet sentiment!
Moms sure do more for us then we realize sometimes,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you james

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