knocking

Knocking at a door not knowing what I'm looking for. Someone answers with no face they exist in time and space.I search my mind my heart my soul there is only emptiness in that deep, deceptive hole. Who is the face someday I'll see the face in the door might just be me.

Reviews

[sasha]

Another good poem, Joe with an interesting ending.

Those two words "deceptive hole"..What if the word hole substitute with the synonyme - cave or gap, from my point of view they sound much better, more poetically instead of banal hole.. It is my own visual, speech perception..
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[LittleAcorn]

I really liked this one a lot! The flow was great, fast paced and smooth. Short, dark and sweet!

[Tomahawk Joe]

thank you for the review

[Aino A Järvinen]

Ah, refreshingly dark. What is this door? Desire? Secrets? What lies behind it?

[Tomahawk Joe]

thank you for the review

[Sarmelendez]

i like the flow and the cryptic use here

[allura]

i enjoy this piece! cryptic and smooth flow

[Tomahawk Joe]

thank you for the review I don't really consider myself a poet but I try anyway

[allura]

i like it, keep it up